Board Thread:Out of Character/@comment-5008281-20160119233609/@comment-4072803-20160119234735

The only thing I could really say (and have already said) was that it felt like the plot suddenly rushed in a few paces. Avoiding this runs the risk of things dragging on, so it might be better to do something a bit smaller scale next time, though with more impact of the overall plot. It could help keep energy and enjoyment a bit higher and keep things from dragging on too much.